Copywriting Makeover: Subtle Changes Make A Big Difference, Part 2 of 2 part 3

March 10th, 2010 Andy No comments

A new copy of the company held on one feature: axel swivel mechanism. This explains how it helps with the adjustment settings to suit every body type and much more. With minimal education required, the customer can understand this one, feature a patent offers a variety of benefits.

Rather than simply sending a detailed list for the closure of copying, the new version of the home page pointed to some additional benefits associated with quality and style.

As I write, I’m looking for places to use keyphrases chosen for this page. This is not a numbers game. My goal is to not use keyphrases as often as possible. This approach is not SEO copywriting, in my book.

Basing your copywriting strategy only on a thin volume of times you can include a copy of keyphrases make sound forced and ridiculous. In fact, in this home page, which keyphrases used only a total of four or five times. However, in awe by some people, ranking the home page in the top 10 (and often times five) for the key terms are selected.

Results

Does it work? Does the change bring the results we want? They sure do not! When asked about increasing conversions, the owner has this Kneelsit.com said, “Our conversion rate has clearly increased since the re-write … maybe by around 35-40%!”

Sometimes, though you may have included important information in a copy, just do not do what you expect. Taking the time to explore, experiment and test. Change the headline. Repeat the words of a paragraph. Subtle changes often make real improvements in conversion and other business areas.

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Copywriting Makeover: Subtle Changes Make A Big Difference, Part 2 of 2 part 2

March 7th, 2010 Andy No comments

The main information needed to generate a sense of trust to skepticism and a sense of stability to hesitate. It is also necessary to provide a clear benefit - one that will catch the reader’s attention.

Also, because it makes sense to do it, I included one of the keyphrase in the title. New primary reading:

Ergonomic Chair Design Based Research Year From Lets You
Sitting To Jam With No Back Pain

Opening Paragraph

A copy of the original started out fine with mentioning some important benefits, but it does not return them. After pointing relief stress and pain, he went straight to an explanation of patent chairs.

Retrieve a new copy of a clean way. It begins by showing that other people (users and professionals) liked the chair, and then running (in the next section) to explain why.

A copy of the original attempt to educate readers about the importance of continuous movement and balance of nature. There’s nothing wrong with educating your customers but, you need to provide sufficient space to do that. Since visitors had limited information about the benefits both on the home page, they may have been confused or - at least - unpersuaded.

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Copywriting Makeover: Subtle Changes Make A Big Difference, Part 2 of 2 part 1

March 4th, 2010 Andy No comments

n part 1 of this series (seen here: http://www.marketingwords.com/articles/articles_subtlechanges.html), we were introduced to Kneelsit.com, Australian manufacturer of ergonomic computer chair looking for a high conversion rate. After looking at several areas in the original copy Kneelsit difficulties (can be seen here: http://www.copywritingcourse.com/kneelsit-home-original.html), I began to rewrite the home page with a specific goal in mind.

The Rewrite

I really feel for the users of this seat. They have back issues and medical issues, trying desperately to get help. I can only imagine how it feels to sit in pain all day, every day. And, after seeing so many false claims another chair, I can understand how they might be skeptical. So, after reading a copy of the new home page, I want visitors to have faith, to see the difference in the chair and Kneelsit understand the benefits this will offer chair.

Of course, those who are chronically ill are not the only visitors to the site Kneelsit. While their main segments, the audience also consists of people who are mild back pain, they are not inconsistent problems or simple fatigue, and those who just want a comfortable chair that will not contribute to any future back problems. Copies are also required to meet their needs and provide information they seek.

You can see the revised copy here: http://www.copywritingcourse.com/kneelsit-home-new.pdf.

The Headline

The original headline was, in fact, a list of benefits. Mention:

Superb Comfort, Perfect Posture, Movement Gentle, Natural Balance

However, only one of the benefits of talking to the audience … Superb Comfort. While the posture may be a secondary thought, gentle movement and balance of nature strike a chord not only because of lack of knowledge. Incidentally, two important benefits, but the general public does not understand what it means. This will require the site to educate visitors about the two before they will understand their full meaning. That education can not take place in the title (not enough room!), So the two benefits that need to be removed.

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Copywriting For An Online Audience part 3

March 1st, 2010 Andy No comments

3. Make sure you copy flow
Reading online is quite tense. Flows in from the top corner, using the jargon, formal language and / or trying to impress your audience with your knowledge of words that contain more than ten letters will only make the reader annoyed, frustrated, and start thinking about places or site they prefer so.

4. KISS
Remember the old saying Keep It Simple Stupid? Writing as if the audience is a group of twelve years. Do not lower your voice, but do not assume they know anything about your business or what you do. They had come to bury full of questions, “What are you selling?” “Why should I choose you?” “Where are you?” “How can I get this?” “How much?”

5. Right tease your audience
Many hot and personal activities down on the Internet, but let’s face it, technology itself does not cause the screen reader’s fog up. Content is what makes things interesting. Internet itself is impersonal two-dimensional screen. Good copywriting may not always meant to get my heart beating, but it must be connected with the audience is meant to break through the barriers of this impersonal. Maybe you need a bit of humor, sophistication, cool company to speak, a personal touch, or yes, even something that excited

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Copywriting For An Online Audience part 1

February 23rd, 2010 Andy No comments

So what’s the problem about copywriting for the internet? This is the same as other forms of copywriting is not it? In a word, yes. However, in other words, no. Confused? Fed up with all these questions? I’m better alone explained later.

No matter what you’re using, all the copywriting should have one main goal - to create effective messages that appeal to the audience it was intended to influence. This golden rule applies to web sites, brochures and sales letters, even adding a nice message for Grandma’s birthday card little pink. However, the Internet presents a unique challenge for the copywriter, though the people who read your sales letter is the same person reading your website.

Think about this for a minute. Did you read on the Internet in the same way you read in the paper? Not long. First of all, there are convenience factors such as monitor resolution, color, glare, and reading surfaces that are not moving. Second, we are conditioned to read the website in different ways. Online, we are quite comfortable scanning sub-heading, click on a hyperlink, and jumping between pages.

Third, the majority of people who seek your business sites are there because they find the services you provide. After all, they make an effort to visit you instead? Readers online can be impatient and demanding, and usually they know what they want before they click through the door he was. If your business is not impressed with them directly, quickly press on the keyboard to find someone who will. Even if you provide products or services they need, do not require much effort to duck into your competitor’s store to look around. Website copywriting is a bit like speed dating - you have to make a great first impression and leave them thinking “I’m sure we’ll be together

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Copywriting Basics - Answer The Questions You’d Want Answered part 2

February 20th, 2010 Andy No comments

This copywriting copywriting tips and techniques will work not only for Web copywriting but also to direct market copywriting, online copywriting others, and offline copywriting, too.

Below are some basics of other copywriting that will help you write your website copy:

1. Keep it simple. No one wants to toil through the long, drawn out confusing explanation. If you can not say it simply, it was good. But by all means, when you can simplify.

2. Make sure you copy the urge calls for action both in the body copy, or text of the article, or in the title. Words like “Act Now,” “Limited Time Offer,” or “Limited Supply” will urge your readers to contact you sooner rather than later.

3. Stay honest. Do not make wild claims just to get the business. Building a good reputation to be in front and honest with your potential customers. Besides appreciate your honesty, they will recommend you to others as a business owner the right to the word and your claim.

4. If you make a bid, making it a difficult one to pass up. Do not waste readers’ time a small, worthless offers. Think about the coupon that you see in magazines and newspapers. Did you take the time to clip them? If so, it was because the offer that is valuable to you.

5. How long can you copy? As long as necessary to adequately answer the questions above for your product or service.

An unanswered question is regarded as an objection in the minds of potential customers. So, be sure to answer all their objections.

Keeping copywriting basics of the Internet in mind when you prepare the goods or sales letters that will appear on your web site. Do not be intimidated because you do not have professional writing experience. Most people want to do business with honest people who know a good product or service that he was trying to sell.

You do not need to be a professional writer to do it. The only requirement is that you really believe in the product or service you’re trying to sell. If you do, your enthusiasm will shine through your writing. If you do not believe in the product or service, your lack of enthusiasm will shine through as well.

So, in summary, to answer questions on the clear and simple that you can, honestly, avoid scams, making a very attractive offer, and be sure to include a call to action.

If you do all these things, you will master the basics of copywriting and should have no trouble converting your website visitors into customers.

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Copywriting Basics - Answer The Questions You’d Want Answered part 1

February 17th, 2010 Andy No comments

Anyone can write effective Internet copy. You just need to know a few copywriting basics known to journalists and writers as the 5 W’s. Threw a “H” in there and all the basics of your copywriting closed.

Who? Tell the reader what your product will help. This should be a target market.

What? Tell the reader what your product or service will do to improve their lives. In other words, tell them the benefits they will receive, what’s in it for them.

When? When is the offer good for? If there is a special offer, when it ended? When will the product or service to help them, immediately or from time to time?

Where? Where you can order a product or service? Where will it work?

Why? Tell the reader why he needs your product or service. Why would benefit them? Why do they have to register or to order today? Why the quantity or limited supply?

How? How do they register or order? How much does it cost? How much return will they see their investments? How does it work?

Sounds simple enough, right? There is a trick - it really that easy. Put yourself in the position of the reader and answer the questions you will likely want to ask or answer about your product or service. Answer questions clearly and thoroughly and your web copy is complete.

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Copywriting 101: How to Get Your Customers to Take Action part 4

February 14th, 2010 Andy No comments

However, my advice for most situations is to combine branding and direct response. Your brand is clearly communicated in advertising and promotional materials, but you also take advantage of some direct response techniques at the same time.

If nothing else, make sure you do not forget the call to action.

Creativity Resources - Write Your Call to Action

Want to put a call to action in your promotional materials but do not know where to start? Here is a simple step-by-step formula:

1. Knowing your purpose for advertising or promotional materials. Why do you run these ads, make this Web site, printing of this brochure? (And no, an acceptable answer is NOT because everyone has one.) Is it to generate leads? Get your name out there? Getting people to buy? Or what?

2. Now write it down.

3. That’s it. It’s your call to action. Whatever the final outcome you want for the campaign is what you should be asking people to do.

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Copywriting 101: How to Get Your Customers to Take Action part 3

February 11th, 2010 Andy No comments

While we are on the topic of a call to action, I want to talk about one type of ad campaign where you rarely see a call to action. This is called branding campaign. Usually they appear on national television by large companies (McDonald’s, Nike, Starbucks, Target). In these instances, efforts to build a brand that will cause you to think about my first business when you are interested in buying their products. For example, when you’re hungry, you think MacDonald’s. You need new sneakers, you think Nike. You’re dying for a cup of joe, so you think Starbucks, etc.

Although there is nothing wrong with branding campaigns, they are tougher to track than the campaign with a specific call to action (Sale ends Saturday, call before Friday to receive a free gift, etc.) They are also called the campaign a direct response because you’re asking customers to respond directly. Direct response campaign can be tested, so you have a good idea what works and what does not (and can be tweaked according to campaign). And, if the campaign does not require the seller to get involved (ie if a call to action is for customers to whip out his wallet there) will only run the campaign itself (and make money by itself).

(One note: You do not need to do more than adding a call to action for a strong response direct campaign, but that does not negate the power of a call to action can bring to your campaign.)

Branding campaign is almost impossible to test, track and tweak. They look good for work or do not appear to work. And if they do not appear to work, it is very difficult to start tweaking to improve response rates.

However, branding is still very, very important. As a business owner, you need a good brand and you need to communicate effectively with the brand. And sometimes it makes sense to run a branding campaign.

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Copywriting 101: How to Get Your Customers to Take Action part 2

February 8th, 2010 Andy No comments

However, the unfortunate truth is your potential customers will not spend much time thinking about it. People have too much going on in their lives to spend so much time and energy on your business. If they read the advertisements or other promotional material and does not contain a call to action, they will tend to say, “Oh, good” and go to the next.

And even if they are interested to buy your offer, they may not know what their next step should be. Do they answer the phone? Go to a specific web page? Visit the shop? And if they do not know what they should do, chances are they will not do anything.

So you must tell your potential customers what you want them to do. (Remember, people are busy, and if you do not make you do business with ease, they probably would not do business with you at all.)

So, back to the call to action above. Did you see they all have in common? The word “now” (or, in the first case, “today”).

If people think that they can buy from you at any time, they will say “oh, I can do this later.” And then rarely come. You need to give them a reason to buy from you now, while they are interested. Adding “now” or some urgency or scarcity of techniques (probably a limited time offer or a statement a few copies left) is a great way to encourage people to do what you want them to do now rather than later.

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